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All Comments on 'Delayed Gratification'

by annie78law

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OvercriticalOvercriticalover 1 year ago

Seems like a brief piece of a story. Where's the plot? Who are these people? Sort of a juvenile day dream. Not badly written and maybe this author will write a real story some day. 3*

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