All Comments on 'Demons and Angels Ch. 01: Bodies'

by milklynx

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muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Even in an introduction you need to at least introduce the MC's in the romance and give a bit of a backstory at least. None of that here and zero romance... you have a long way to go to catch up.

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