Denying Alex

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Revenge: a dishy bloke served hot girl best.
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Written for the 2020 750 Words Challenge. An attempt to tell a whole story in very few words.

Alex's twenty-first was a huge party, but odd. Most guests ignored Rapeyfucker McBastardface. His school gang pushed drinking games, strip poker, and perved on fresh 'meat'. Us later acquaintances socialised separately in his parents' welcoming house.

Alex's little brother, finally eighteen, visually Alex's clone, flirted rather successfully with my friends. Sweet, good-hearted kid.

By midnight, Alex was fuming; young Bob had ladies swarming. Alex didn't, whinging, "nice guys come last..."

Alex tried guilting me, again, into sex. "Come on, Cassie! You fucked my best mate, after all!"

Terrible logic. Yes, I'd bedded Duncan - in the going-to-sleep sense. He'd wanted to shag, sure, but assured first-year virginal me, "nothing you don't want!"

I'd pleasantly surprised him, allowing snogging and roaming hands. A stranger's hand holding his dick quite satisfied him. Next morning - I'd declined any further action - he'd explained, "Enjoying a hand job? Or being a rapist? No contest!" He leant back and appreciated the former.

Duncan avoided Alex, since. Awkward; their parents were friends. Similar for me - my mum eventually stopped matchmaking, but we'd been "such close housemates, you can't leave him out..." Thing was, no-one had damning evidence. Just a general miasma of sleazy rumours.

"Piss off."

"You heard her." Bob supported me, nervously.

"Girls! No manners... Invite them to great parties - think they'd offer summat in return!"

Replacement bezzie Ed grunted, too Neanderthal for speech.

Then Duncan's voice: "What, you want payment in sexual favours? Not really an invite, then! Ordering hookers, more like..."

Ed raised fists; Dunc's defensive forearm welcomed them.

I interrupted. "I came because your mum asked. And Bob's nice." Implication by omission.

Bob blocked Ed; Duncan and I exited swiftly. Alex's mates occupied the lounge - we joined rival, better, parties gathering outside.

"How's life, Cass?"

"Graduated... starting junior-doctoring next month. Single, though. You?"

"Break-up, couple months gone... Working, a start-up, summer off..." Meaningfully: "So - you don't need to get up tomorrow morning, either?"

Dreadful, unsubtle chat-up line. But - both single, he'd rightly deduced I wasn't a virgin after uni...

"No. Where're you sleeping?"

"Here, somewhere. Crowding in that huge tent, or a small one...?"

Sound travels. No.

"Dining room?" Office, more like, but lushly carpeted...

We hid bedding beneath the table, waited for folks to go to bed, including Bob with my friend Fran, then snuck inside.

Warm, unlike outdoors! We lay on our sleeping bags, idly undressing each other. Three years; his body hadn't changed.

I liked it then, I liked it now.

And now I had the pill, condoms, and confidence.

He fingered my knickers; his uncrossed boundary, before. "May I?"

The politeness seduced me. "Hell, yes!"

Bared arse.

Fingers in my cunt.

Squeezing.

Tongue, on my clit.

Sucking.

My bra removed.

A hand lifting my breasts, larger than when he'd seen me topless before.

And another hand.

His elegant smooth cock, blushing against his pale skin.

"I'm not taking anything for granted..."

"Good." I passed a condom.

"Serious?"

"Take your time."

"Got all night... "

He fingered me again.

Once the house quietened, we spread out, sixty-nineing. Gently, enjoying the sensations. Duncan sprawled across the deep cream carpet.

Eyebrow. Question.

Answering nod.

Dressed cock.

Blastoff!

He entered, deep. Like I'd imagined, when I'd not been ready, before.

But Alex's manor made me want extra filth. Like tomcats, spraying territory.

Could Duncan spray? After coming inside me, of course - priorities...

I shifted to all-fours. "More!"

Duncan obliged.

Cock descended.

I stifled screams, my walls awesomely stretched. Wonderful!

Thrust.

"Fuuuuck!", I whispered.

"Aaaaaah!" Louder.

Withdrawal. The bastard!

Then thrown onto my back, legs lifted over my shoulders, he sank back in, spreading me. Kin'ell...

A noise. We paused.

Nothing.

Dunc grinned, resuming fucking me like a sledgehammer.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh...."

Impossible to be silent. Not loud; not quiet either.

Another noise.

Dunc held his hand over my mouth as we froze.

"Nothing." He settled his mouth over mine and returned to fucking my brains out.

My head lolled backwards, towards the door.

We'd shut it.

Pointlessly. The door was a frame of eight large, clear, panes...

Staring, through the glass, was Alex.

Nothing I could do.

My orgasm tsunamied over me. Should have washed him away.

I inhaled Duncan's hand, rippled my cunt round his cock, rocked wildly.

Uncontrollable.

Fantastic.

Not Alex.

Soon as I was spent, Duncan exploded inside me.

Alex retreated. I grinned. The nice guy had come last - immediately after the nice girl...

I've never told Duncan why Alex now hates him.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good premise.

Disappointing story.

Simply listing what happened, not describing it in detail.

Two stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
No.

Just no.

KumquatqueenKumquatqueenabout 3 years agoAuthor

Note to self: 'Rapeyfucker McBastardface' is clearly too subtle a way to describe a man as a *fucking* *bastard* *rapist*...

BramblethornBramblethornalmost 4 years ago

Poor Alex. What is this world coming to when a guy can't even pester women for sex and perve on them without being called names, turned down, and even FORCED to stand at the window watching them having sex with somebody else instead?

- Outraged, Milton Keynes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
The author is the real piece of shit.

Even if we contend that Cassie wasn't a bitch, there is still something very wrong with this story. What purpose does Alex serve in the story except a guy who exists just to suffer and be hurt by others? Duncan is liked by others and Duncan has sex with every girl and then he fucks another. That itself is a boring story, but you add in the retarded monologue of a girl who likes Duncan and hates Alex both for basically no reason, and it just makes her like a sadistic piece of shit. The author is the real villain for making this fucking stupid monument to sadism. If it wasn't Sadism, Alex wouldn't even be in the story, it'd just be a story of Cassie having sex with Duncan after she got back from college. Typical shlock but not sociopathic like this story.

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