All Comments on 'Deprivation'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Way to ruin an extremely hot story with an unwanted pregnancy epilogue.

Submisky35Submisky35over 4 years ago
Wonderful

Wow, Mason_Hess, you nailed it with this story. Extremely well written erotica. The descriptions of the feelings Alexis was having through the whole experience were so vivid that the reader could transport him/herself into her predicament. As bizarre as some of it seemed to be, there was nothing that could not have been easily accomplished in the real world. Could have been a true story.

The epilogue didn't diminish my enjoyment. It, too, could easily have been part of a true story.

I'll be looking for more in the future from you...I hope not a year.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wow

It was so good throughout and then the end gave it just what it needed! This story is absolutely amazing! Thank you!

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A random writer of short fiction, trying for longer stuff lately.