All Comments on 'Desperate Demi Ch. 02'

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KMB2476KMB2476over 7 years ago

Very hot as usual! Demi's fat lesbo butt is made for fucking and you always write it up so well!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
very good

Any chance you can add scat or WS in the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
So Hot.

Other than the hot sex, what really makes this so hot is the psychological lust they all have for each other. You do a good job in always explaining that. For Ch.3 lets have Taylor fuck Selena in her ass, as we read how crestfallen that makes Demi. And I agree with the other comment, it's time for things to get dirty.

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