All Comments on 'Desperate - Prologue'

by luststruck96

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63luckyman63luckymanover 2 years ago

Nice start. I reserve judgement till I read the next part.

Lucky

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i read the second part first. This was good, but again to short, hope the next few chapters are longer, but keep them coming I look forward to reading your work.

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