All Comments on 'Deviant Dorm Rooms Ch. 14'

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WhanmoreWhanmore9 months agoAuthor

Unfortunately my unedited version was published. I'll get the edited version online ASAP. Hope it ddnt take away from the story.

pkp033pkp0339 months ago

Excellent scene with Jennifer/Maddy/Anton, nice to get the reverse angle

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Unedited this chapter may be, but it is so good that it is hardly noticeable. One can only hope that the author will continue this outstanding series, because it has everything: great writing, great characters, and a great storyline. What is hardest is waiting for the next chapter to be submitted. This chapter rates Five Stars, and so does the author.

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