All Comments on 'Dex & Alfie'

Loved it, definitely one of your best stories! Great character development and build up to a great finish; I’m one who always enjoys the build up of a good story line instead of jumping right into the sex scenes. Hoping there will be a follow up that takes us through the Christmas visit and coming out to Dex’s parents (it’s got to be happier that Alfie’s), and the fun of taking sex to the next step. Hmmm, maybe both are vers?

Oh yeah, I definitely agree with what Bidiculous said and then some! This was a magnificently beautiful story and the perfect way to begin the holiday season. It had me tearing up more than once and I couldn't have enjoyed it more. There's absolutely no way five stars can come anywhere close to being enough this story. Great job!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write chapter two for these guys. This is a beautiful story and we're just at the beginning!!!!

Really enjoyed this story, it was funny, sweet and hot! Really appreciate the comedic dialoguing as a writer, you definitely got some chuckles out of me! Hope there's another chapter coming!!

Great story and so well-written. We don't need to know everything about each character, but you've told us enough to make them real and all are warm, caring guys. I hope that you write more about them, partly because I want to see Alfie get some real pleasure out of life and partly because I want to see where they go sexually!

Awesome story it would be great if you continued with more chapters! You truly write so well!

I’m a bit surprised that more wasn’t mentioned about Allie’s navel. Bound to be a cute innie.

Beautiful. Thank you!

I loved this on so many levels. Thank you.

You are a skilled story teller. I like well executed characters and stylistic transitional flow ot content. Bravo StraightsensitveGuy.