All Comments on 'Diana in the Offing Ch. 02'

This is, I think, the best thing you have written, MamaS - 5 stars xxxxx

Justice is a dish best served hot and wet, with a side order of discipline, subjugation, and orgasm denial. Charlotte’s gift from Emily was extremely thoughtful and beautifully wrapped. I must admit I kept expecting Margaret to be one of the ladies in attendance, but the penny didn’t drop that she WAS the gift until the very last moment. Very well played SerradaC. So now I am left to wonder what events will lead to Lady Cynthia receiving her fateful letter of inheritance. - And will Charlotte and Lady Cynthia ever meet??? I want soooo much more from this collaboration. (Yes, I’m a needy and greedy reader when it comes to certain delicious stories.) 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

Confusing writing.

A wonderfully sensual follw-up to chapter one. I am one of Pixie's army of followers and admirers, but I'll be working my way through your published works in the next few weeks. Thank you for sharing this very stimulating tale. I give it the full five stars.

I was upset by the references to women being “colored”. I found it offensive. It was offensive when my Gran said it in the ‘80’s and it is no less offensive today. Please stop.

Thank you, my darling Pixie; I try my best but am a poor shadow of your talent. Thank you for letting me contribute what I can to your wonderful story. xxxxx

Thank you, Anon, I am glad I was able to keep you guessing. Yes, there needed to be some justice for Charlotte, but poor Margaret was a prisoner too, now perhaps they can both heal, in time, once Margaret learns to heel. xxx

Anon, I am sorry you found my writing style confusing; I am told it is eclectic, which is an excellent way of saying ... weird. However, I hope you will at least finish her story and carry on the much better portion penned by my darling Pixiehoff.

HottieOlwen thank you for your comment. I hope you will enjoy my other works. I owe whatever success I have, to my beloved Pixiehoff for her constant encouragement and support.

Dear Anon, I am sorry that you found the term used, offensive. The term ‘colored’ is culturally, socially, and historically accurate. I hope you noted that although the term was used, everyone within the story was treated with respect. I believe that one's actions are more meaningful than the words used.

Not sure what to say, so as the saying goes " best to say nothing".