by DianaRose98
Well, a bit excessive of a beating but not unheard of. The story should have continued with what happened after Christine left Diana on the floor and taken to the cell. How long did she lie on the floor? Who came an got her? How was Diana taken to her cell? What was the reaction of her cellmates? They did not know why the prisoners were being taken in the first place. One wonders if the other prisoners will be taken and beaten? Was Diana is shock? With a few beatings like this Diana will change into a hardened prisoner. What else is in store for Diana?
An unusual view of judicial punishment but plausible. Your stories have both got a reasonable start, a pitiful middle and no ending, please continue writing and give us your readers the conclusion to these tales.