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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

- What, what? - I pretend like I didn't hear. Trevor decided to act as a translator from the blowjob language:

That is NOT how dialogue is written.

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"What, what?" I pretend like I didn't hear. Trevor decided to act as a translator from the blowjob language:

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I agree with Anon. If you fix the way you write dialogue it would readable.

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