All Comments on 'Dinner and Dessert'

Another slut!

3

Fun night

Do not marry that whore

Spelling!

Nothing...

What a vile girlfriend not marrying material

No build up and then they just fucked me lol weak

Amit, best friend since primary school, practically brothers.

"I'm in your part of the neighborhood, would you like to meet up?"

Guessing homo author went full on flamer after that right? Didnt read a word, it smelled like shit at that point, with even worse writing. So yeah, why waste the time.

Stop me if Im wrong. BTW that doesnt apply to the chin lickers, all a story needs for them is "So I licked her lovers jizz from her pussy" and they're covering their laptop.

The basic idea was very erotic but the charm spoiled due severe lack of patience to build up the background of the story. You need to develop the skill of building an erotic background too that would lead to ultimate threesome ecstasy.

Very disappointing story, the spelling's atrocious, no build up and too brief.

Poorly written Indian cuck porn.