by Just_a_desi_guy
Nice one, and please try to write a follow up for Kalpana aunty seeing Harshitha naked. I'd love to see how that goes. Keep up the good work
Excellent chapter, but I wanted the teasing to continue and gradually escalate. It will also be hot if Kalpana Aunty catches Harshita in the buff and blackmails her into exposing herself more publicly. Kalpana maybe can make Harshita dress sluttier, take away her regular clothes, modify her clothes to be more revealing, coerce her into doing daring things, etc. I'm really looking forward to the next installment.
Do not rush! Let the story unfold itself. Licking pussy and blowjob on the first encounter? That’s a lot for a virgin girl. It would have been far better if she asked him to jerk in front of her again. After a few days, give him a hand job. And then let him play with her boobs while giving hand. And then moved on to blowjob. After some days, getting fingered while blowing. Then a 69, eat her pussy. In between all these, Kaplana Aunty sees her. And some other characters introduced as well. Don’t let her become a fucktoy too soon. No fun in it
So refreshing. Keep it within “ exhibitionist theme “
Not every exhibitionist has to end up fucked !!
Even if she is to get fucked, it would be better if see is seen and explored by many before that.
The best part is that she is a virgin who likes to exhibit. Once fucked, she is just another whore showing off.
We would like to read about this exhibiting virgin, not a cheap whore
You should continue the “ YOUNG GIRL'S GRADUAL FORAY” series by Fantasytic as well. Please write that series once you finish this one.
Fantasytic wrote it well by slowly building up the story. You may consider similar approach for this story as well.
But keep writing. Don’t disappear like many other desi writers.
Thanks for all the comments. Point taken: too much sexual advances in first meeting. I have some new plans for this story in the next episodes
Just one thing: the girl being a virginity is not exalted here. This story delves into the thought process of a curious and intelligent girl who gets her sexual freedom for the first time.
A good story, seemingly real and very erotic!! Look forward to the next episodes! Hopefully the episodes will continue and become a novella !!
Good point Desi Guy. It’s your story and don’t change how it goes based on the comments. It’s an original story and that’s what it makes it a good one. Just build it slowly so that it doesn’t end in a few parts. Well done!!
Really great story, with good build-up. Erotic and satisfying. Need several more chapters. Keep writing man
I'm not one to leave comments, but I just had to say that this was really good
May be you are just a desi guy. But this is not just another story. It’s a good one. Consistency is the key though
very hot n erotic narration, if possible continue with more encounters etc.,....
I reckon this story is based on a real place and a real girl. Not necessarily a true story, but creating it based on a real place? Some decades ago, we lived in a similar row of houses with the houses opening to into an alley and the bathrooms were on the opposite side of it. Windows opened into the alley and if they were left open, those who pass by can look in. I used to expose my then young wife while I fucked her mostly in doggy style facing away from the window. Or removed the blanket to expose her thighs all the way to her pussy while she slept. And made sure that the dim light was on while doing so. Mostly at night but sometimes on other times as well. Used to see cum stains outside the window or near the bathroom. This was before the days of smart phones so there was not much to fear about. But I never went beyond showing her off. A few men and boys were entertained I believe. If anyone had approached me and confronted, probably I would have allowed them a closer look or even some touching while she slept. I imagine such things happened but in reality I was too afraid to make anything actually happen. I love this story imagining it happening where we lived.
An excellent and well-written read. High quality and EXTREMELY sexy! Great work!
This series ranks one of the top among my favourite sex stories. The detailing and the creativity is no oridnary, it's dick-blowing!