by The_Lady_Jo
Thank you for this wonderful ride through 6 chapters. When you wrote it's long I had hoped for much more but it was great anyway. Looking forward to reading more about these three.
I liked this. I wish you hadn't rushed the time in the club. That could have done longer. The epilogue also could have been its own chapter with some goodies in it. 2 pages isn't long so go for it and tell your stories. They are good just go a bit farther.
Great characters, great stories. You could adapt these to novel length. The relationships are very satisfying. Thanks!
I give you 5/5 stars for the story and a 1/5 stars for stopping it.(LOL) I really enjoyed it and can't wait till your next fantasy is put to paper. Thank you for sharing