All Comments on 'Discovery in Germany Pt. 06'

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xzg_ltrtcxzg_ltrtc9 months ago

Thank you for this wonderful ride through 6 chapters. When you wrote it's long I had hoped for much more but it was great anyway. Looking forward to reading more about these three.

rentturtlerentturtle9 months ago

I liked this. I wish you hadn't rushed the time in the club. That could have done longer. The epilogue also could have been its own chapter with some goodies in it. 2 pages isn't long so go for it and tell your stories. They are good just go a bit farther.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great characters, great stories. You could adapt these to novel length. The relationships are very satisfying. Thanks!

PappasleazePappasleaze8 months ago

I give you 5/5 stars for the story and a 1/5 stars for stopping it.(LOL) I really enjoyed it and can't wait till your next fantasy is put to paper. Thank you for sharing

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Just a proud ginger lady. I am actually quite shy and if we met on the streets you would never guess the kinky side that lingers beneath. My stories tend to range on the kinkier side. I love to write and to know my writing pleases others. If you like what you read please let ...

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