All Comments on 'Diss Functional 2'

Oh, yeah!

Love it!

still reading, but had to pop over to acknowledge

'wretched hive of scum & villiany' nice easter egg!

Thank you for this it is going very good..

Still an odd dynamic, but I think that's part of the point. The verbal abuse, even if it's a weird way of showing love, is a bit offputting. Still, this ended up being far more tender and loving that you'd think. 5*

Her daddy actually sounded like he was jealous of you breeding his daughter. It would've been interesting to know what Pammy's Mommy said in response to your brother tell her that you are the one giving them grandchildren. Bring on the next one. 5☆

Aunty and niece almost seem like lovers as well as uncle and niece. Love her dad's responses. Like another commenter said i would love to know how her mom feels. Love all the verbage back-n-forth, especially seeing how he always gets the worst of it from both ladies, wondering when or even if the ladies will be passionately kissing each other seems as we are headed that way.

Great second chapter. Looking forward to three and four as always!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

enjoy most of your works but this one just not for me

Love it the wife reminds me of my ex-wife keep up the good work