by kaiyandom
Your capture of how a Femdom can control a submissive, getting him to do things to himself that wouldn't have believed he could have done, even from miles away is just exquisite. You captured it perfectly. Thank You.
Get your tenses and POVs right, and you will be a fine author in time.
This is AT LEAST a ten star story. Wow!
Kaiyandom, welcome to Literotica! Your recent stories have all been excellent and exciting. This website has a new star writing for it now!