by Fleuron84
WOW! AWESOME & OUTSTANDING STORY. Great plot & characters. Thanks for developing this amazing story and plot. I hope you choose to continue with additional chapters. 5 Stars.
Enjoyed the series, looking forward to more, as promised by the last sentence. Lucy Williams next? Team sports, both boys and girls? The variations are endless. Thanks for Proof Reading your stories, makes them so much better to read.
we need more of the surprises lol. my only suggestion is maybe to make longer pages than just two a chapter.