All Comments on 'Doctor's Appointment'

That is a story told in the first person. The main character is telling the story from their point of view. It doesn't mean the reader is in it b/c they are reading the word 'I' at the beginning of the sentences. Lots of stories are told from the first person point of view.

...where the writer uses the lame premise of telling the reader that they (the reader) is in the story.

I'm 6'1" tall (but in a wheelchair), 270 lbs. and have a big, bushy gray beard, so I am reasonably certain I was not the person dressed in nurses' stockings and GoGo boots.

Sorta ruins any suspension of disbelief I might have had if the author had just avoided this premise.

I'm just sayin'...

Learn to proof read and use spell check. Several times " i " was used when it shoulc have been " I " for first person singlar.