by jummbuk
I think a little over the top as far as the punishment went, but, then, you did warn us!
Way too extreme. And real dominant relationships enjoy an appropriate severe punishment not just piling on more and more penalties. That is a sign it is not working.
Totally amazing story I really enjoyed it's intensity and the writing style.. I am hoping that there is more to come as the story has tremendous potential for development. Please write some more parts π