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jay1459jay1459over 2 years ago

Fantastic story -- Love the series!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A perfectly knit web of a capture, great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A good basic storyline and actually a nice read. But that’s all it was. A basic storyline. It needed more meat on the bones. Too matter of fact and not enough detail. I would suggest you need an editor, or at least a beta reader, because there’s an awful lot of spelling mistakes.

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My original genre was Female Domination but I am branching out. If you’re looking for some literary gems, may I direct you to the many well written stories in other places on Literotica. My stories are what I’d call “Masturbation Stories,” quick and to the point, without a lot...