All Comments on 'Domino Domina Ch. 01'

Good premise.

But sex is boring. Too mechanical. Too automatic. Nothing but pain. Nothing about her. Is she getting hot? How do we know? No teasing him with her breasts? Why? What does her pussy look like? Shaved? Groomed? Hairy? No letting him get at least a whiff of how it smells?

Why didn't she ask him to be specific about the kind of porn he liked? And about what he imagined her doing to him? And what he hoped she would let him do to her, to please her?

And you need a proofreader/editor.

You wrote DONE when you meant DON'T.

STINGS when you meant STRINGS.

YOU when you meant YOUR.

Three stars.

i have looked for a woman like her all my life

Quite nice.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

nice story I like it very much (if i like the cam-thing i ve not yet decided). anyway 5*