All Comments on 'Don't Cum, It's Dirty!'

There are stores. Why does she have to order? This is stupid.

Yes, it really is. Keep writing!

Great story!

Keep it up

GOOD STORY

and well written. She's just too mean, though. Would like to see the tables turned sometime in the future.

One of the WORST stories I've read. "She" is a bitch; "He" is a wimp.

Excellent, and undoubtedly going on out there just this way in some households.

This story is incredibly hot. The teasing and denial is great, but the way she cries ‘dirty dirty dirty’ hits upon a fantasy I didn’t even know I had. Fantastic work!

Good premise.

But pretty predictable.

Why does his cock go into her pussy so quickly? Why didn't she tease it with her hand for a while? Why didn't she rub his cock on her pussy/clit first -- before allowing insertion?

Nothing with other parts of her body? No breast play? No nipple sucking? No kissing even?

Three stars.

Good premise.

But need more details about EXACTLY how she was teasing him.

Four stars.

Oh dear another sad fuck author, dreaming of being a failure. I wonder why the world is going down the pan.

Delicious. And to the commenter who said "why doesn't she just go to the store?", you don't understand the whole premise? Toying with him, making him waiiiittttt to heighten his excitement? Called tease and denial? Finding phony excuses to delay him and use him as a plaything?