All Comments on 'Don't Drink and Drive'

This is an excellent premise for a great story, and I look forward to reading more. Congratulations on your first entry here!

Hopefully there will be more parts as this one left too many holes.

Good introduction, though there needed to be some explanation that this was set in a different and inexistant environment. The holes left give it potential but it needed ‘Part 1’ in the heading as now you’re stuck with a Part 2 and no Part 1.

Sign me up! Great idea!

It is intriguing - the idea of a court awarding ownership of a slave to a private citizen as compensation for damages. That creates a unique relationship between them that is quite different than if he were a stranger who had purchased her at a slave auction. Also fascinating the way you are having her owner treat her as a human being with feelings, even as he enjoys his prerogatives as her owner. I do hope you continue this wonderful story - at the same time I hope that you will find someone to help you proofread!

Criminal laws in this country are a bit strange to put it mildly and some more editing would have been helpful but the story is interesting nonetheless.