by dont_wake_me_up
OH MY GOSH YOU ARE A FUCKING AWESOME WRITER!!!! PLEASE,PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..............
YOUR NEW FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very good start to this story. Very interested in seeing where it goes.
It was pretty good. Next time I just suggest that you read over it once you're done to catch any grammer or spelling errors. Other than that, kiddos.
thank you soo much i appreciate the feedback. i know i have to reread my stuff by im allergic to doing it lol my flaw sigh. i was so nervous about submitting so thank you for the support
Please write more and very soon!!!! We readers need to find out where these two will end up:)