All Comments on 'Don't Wake Me Up Jus Yet Ch. 01'

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ebony_divaebony_divaalmost 16 years ago
FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

OH MY GOSH YOU ARE A FUCKING AWESOME WRITER!!!! PLEASE,PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..............

YOUR NEW FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
nice job

Very good start to this story. Very interested in seeing where it goes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
really good start

please keep going and update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Damn!

Knocked it out of the park girlfriend! *I'm all tingly*

melinimelinialmost 16 years ago
Nice but...

It was pretty good. Next time I just suggest that you read over it once you're done to catch any grammer or spelling errors. Other than that, kiddos.

dont_wake_me_updont_wake_me_upalmost 16 years agoAuthor
thank you

thank you soo much i appreciate the feedback. i know i have to reread my stuff by im allergic to doing it lol my flaw sigh. i was so nervous about submitting so thank you for the support

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
keep it coming

Please write more and very soon!!!! We readers need to find out where these two will end up:)

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