by dont_wake_me_up
Please write more and very soon!!!! We readers need to find out where these two will end up:)
thank you soo much i appreciate the feedback. i know i have to reread my stuff by im allergic to doing it lol my flaw sigh. i was so nervous about submitting so thank you for the support
It was pretty good. Next time I just suggest that you read over it once you're done to catch any grammer or spelling errors. Other than that, kiddos.
Very good start to this story. Very interested in seeing where it goes.
OH MY GOSH YOU ARE A FUCKING AWESOME WRITER!!!! PLEASE,PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..............
YOUR NEW FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!