All Comments on 'Down the Hall Pt. 03'

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Car6555Car6555about 1 year ago

Please let it stay between bro and sis

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I want Ellie

Marvin2017Marvin2017about 1 year ago

Nice trilogy. Now on to something new…

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Changing from her telling the story to his telling the story is very disconcerting unless it is a "He Says...She Says" story which I actually enjoy. In fact, I have noticed more than a few stories on Literotica that I felt would have been better if told in a "He Says...She Says" viewpoint.

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Just trying to have fun :) I've been told I write like I'm scripting a play. Hopefully some people will like that style. Not all content is made for everyone! If you don't like something please don't read my work and please don't send hate. Thank you :) https://linktr.ee/e...

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