All Comments on 'Down the Hall Pt. 04'

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redlion75redlion75about 1 year ago

Sounds like dad's a pedo at heart wanting to spank is daughters' naked ass as a child.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

please do not ruin this by adding the father. that seems what you are hinting at with the spanking bit.

M4827333M4827333about 1 year ago

You ruined everything. congratulations.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Please keep going ! Hope Ellie takes control of Dan.

Viejo_ChingonViejo_Chingon10 months ago

Good story but I suspect Dad’s done more than spank Ellie’s butt, especially when he kisses her on the lips before he left the house earlier in the day.

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