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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great start.. lots of ways you can go. looking forward to the next installment.

masqbehemothmasqbehemoth11 months ago

Good start! World building felt a little clunky/awkward but still well done. Looking forward to the next chapter with hope it stays wholesome!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

A little rough, but I enjoyed it and look forward to the next part!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Very unusual yet incredibly entertaining with some interesting characters that I wouldn’t have expected in that location but you made it work. I look forward to see what our traveler has next in his plans of conquest and good deeds.

zena99zena9911 months ago

A very interesting start. I look forward to more of Brooke (and her friends) and of course the Goblins. Thank you.

bear1999bear199911 months ago

a potash mine..goblins...who'd have thunk it. Nice start thanks.

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