All Comments on 'DragonStorm Ch. 03'

Well done indeed - you have opened up a rich seam of material which has not been mibed. Very much looking forward to seeing you develop this aspect of Pernese life

You're really going to brain fuck me really good. I've already realized that I'm going to remember YOUR stories so well that eventually I'm going to blend them together with the GENUINE Pern novels from Anne McCaffrey and Todd McCaffrey and become totally confused. Talk about "Blurred Lines"!!! Ungh!! Scored 5/5.

I almost quit reading your stories with this chapter. It's not your writing... it's easy to get immersed and lost in your stories... it's the subject matter... and getting immersed in a subject I find abhorrent is driving me away. I'm repulsed by cuckolding... and the romantic way that Darian and Selana found each other in DragonForce makes it that much harder to watch the explicit and unconditional force of Pern dragon lust overcome avion mate-for-life love. But I'm just OCD enough I wanted to finish what had been up to now a compelling story, and the only way I would continue was by skimming the last chapter... no spoilers here but I'll grit my teeth and take a tums and push on... 5/5 BUT you're killing me Smalls!