All Comments on 'Dreaming of Sin Ch. 09'

Your writing is excellent. You should consider making a Patreon or something similar. I'd definitely subscribe.

This is twisty sh#$! I'm loving the concept and the execution is staying precise. 👏 (Many get sloppy with the details writing erotica) It's genius that Saliah can't read Jack, and I like that you're giving Jack growth instead of regressing him into base urges.