All Comments on 'Drinking and Crossing Lines'

I have found a few places that need edited. How can I do that?

Eric the editing would make the story much better to read. Great first upload.

Good effort, story a little thin, pretty quick transition from bffs , to swinging, wife swapping lezbos,

I couldn't get to the good parts because characters names changed in the first couple paragraphs. Wish I could have gotten farther. I like the premise.