All Comments on 'Drunk Story (mf)'

Have now read two of your pieces — this and “Sleep Orgasms”. Both erotically captivating in very different ways, which says a lot about your creativity, I believe, yet both easy to visualize and easy to imagine re-reading. If any indication, your writing is already very good — OK, you say that you want to get better. By all means. I look forward to reading your other contributions and future pieces. Thanks for sharing. 5 stars.

More Bukowski than Nin…;)