All Comments on 'Due Process'

This was certainly well written. Not as arousing as I am normally looking for on this site. Clever idea. Keep up the good work.

But the story was vague... no real beginning or end... kinda drifted in and out

I'm a great fan of Succubus stories and I have to say this is one of the better ones, not just because of the sex but because like Hyrda you've taken the time to flesh out your characters.

Mia's very human doubt, and then change of heart, was a pleasure to read.

Thanks

I've read your stories "Redhorn", "Spoils of War", and "The Legacy of Argus"; and I enjoyed all of them as much as I've enjoyed "Due Process". You are right, ManyEyedHydra is a great succubus author and I love his work. I may have been writing quite a bit of succubi stories myself; but I don't think I rate the quality that Hydra does. I like how this story played out, AJ, and I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future in this genre. I do prefer more story to sex; but partners seduced into their own destruction through copulation is always a happy read for me. Keep up the great work.

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....just kidding. :) I know finding a title for this was a bitch. Nice fantasy backdrop. The Quelistan sisterhood is a nice invention. I'm sure you can make use of them again and maybe fill out some more of the background. (I still think you should have gone for the jugular and made Marius's end really gruesome though - just for the fun of it ;) )

Great to see more from you. This and Aretmis are among my very favorites on the site!

I must say that I'm an unconditional lover of soul sucking stories. And boy, does this one deliver :)

The teacher/student thing is a nice trick to explain everything that's going on, and the style is smooth and pleasant.

Concerning the 'no scene-setting pre-amble', well I prefer to have a (short) one, but that's a matter of taste.

A big thanks for writting this! I'll be coming back for more :P

I could tell it had manyeyedhydra's touch to it. It was a awesome story, erotic and scary at the same time. Great conclusion with the guy stuck watching at the cell wall...definately helped remind me that they had killed the guy and pedro knew it.

This was a great read and a well thought and fleshed out story. My only question is did he do it or was he innocent? I know that he had to die anyway I just want to know if I was correct to cheer for him. I enjoy underdog stories and this is one of my favorites

good story but i think that you should make a story like this where when they give the man a choice he runs out and escapes.

I really really really wished you still posted... All of your stories are incredible but this one was my favorite. It even had the potential for a great series. Literotica needs more authors like you.

I absolutely loved this story. Fantastic.

All of your stories are good, but they could all also have series stemming from all of them as well. I think you need to pick one or two and carry the series wherever your creative juices takes it. That's just my opinion though, regardless great read!