All Comments on 'Dumpster Divin''

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sbhammersbhammeralmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

You're right about the title and the ending. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts! I appreciate the feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Feedback

For me it seemed a bit short with a abrupt ending that doesn't seem to match the title.

Possible Recomindations:

Try to make the ending seem less abrupt.

sbhammersbhammerabout 9 years agoAuthor
A Dud

Wow, this story really bombed. Anyone care to let me know why or how it could have been improved?

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