All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 33'

Kweh, heh, heh! For God’s sake, please, cut this kind of crap out.

Disappointing

Just pointless sex, no plot at all in this 'chapter'. If you read comments before reading, this is a safe 'chapter' to skip you don't miss anything in the slightest.

Nice sex romp chapter. Personally I’d like a little more plot development to go with it but I’m enjoying the story.

Looking forward to him getting with Halia, and to finding out who he picks for his next 2 companions. My guess is Crystal for the water glyph and his mother for the life glyph, if only cause they kinda fit them at least a little and I know you love the incest. Personally, I'm actually hoping for Maya, though.

The concept started out interesting but after 33 chapters (even ones this short) there needed to be more development and storyline. This is 99% cookie cutter stroke-fodder and barely 1% story. Stroke stories have their place but as one-offs. I should've stopped before this but have been hoping this would go somewhere. 1* and hope you figure it out.

I have really enjoyed all of the Chapters so far, but in the earlier chapters you mentioned another sister (Crystal) and a mother (Zoe) are you planning on introducing either of them into your series?

no plot. again