All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 34'

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Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettover 1 year ago

A few words of plot, then back to the pointless sex. Just skimmed most of it because it was so repetitive.

tejingtejingover 1 year ago

Well, that answers my question from earlier. Also explains why water was the odd one out getting 2 generic monster girl types.

GrayWolf53GrayWolf53over 1 year ago

still no plot

skimmed almost all of it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent story telling continues in this chapter. The love scene here is beautifully written, and thoroughly engaging, enriching the overall plot in a marvelous way. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Skimmed it looking for the plot.

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