by mypenname3000
He has expanded his Harem now on to expanding his dungeon. love he tale. 5 stars.
Another 'chapter' that can be safely skipped. And my prediction was somewhat right from the last 'chapter' except for the participants.
GET TO THE PLOT!
For all of you “Get to the plot” readers…. Get a life! There are stories in here with over 50 pages that have sex scenes longer than 2 pages…which is the length of this CHAPTER. It’s his format people! A few sex chapters, then a few plot chapters. Good lord!
Another wonderful chapter in this outstanding series. The plot here is even better than the previous chapter, with a joyful romantic atmosphere that is truly engaging.
Too many sex only chapters. I love the overall story, but a plot in each chapter would make it better.