All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 03'

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SlofredSlofredover 1 year ago

He has expanded his Harem now on to expanding his dungeon. love he tale. 5 stars.

Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettover 1 year ago

Another 'chapter' that can be safely skipped. And my prediction was somewhat right from the last 'chapter' except for the participants.

GET TO THE PLOT!

lit_e_fanlit_e_fanover 1 year ago

For all of you “Get to the plot” readers…. Get a life! There are stories in here with over 50 pages that have sex scenes longer than 2 pages…which is the length of this CHAPTER. It’s his format people! A few sex chapters, then a few plot chapters. Good lord!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Another wonderful chapter in this outstanding series. The plot here is even better than the previous chapter, with a joyful romantic atmosphere that is truly engaging.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Too many sex only chapters. I love the overall story, but a plot in each chapter would make it better.

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