All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 08'

Sigh, of course he's into her, and jealous, and probably feels like he's been denied what he's somehow entitled to... Somehow, I can't see things turning out peacefully with that guy.

Love to see the plot advancing.

Suggestion: change the layout and traps of the dungeon after someone unauthorized sees it. Also, maybe seal it off (as much as possible) while inside.

Good chapter! I really do like your story!

Short but good. Much better than your average chapter. I know most people want a quick wank but I want a story to read. You have the basis for one buried in all the sex. You just need to balance them better.