All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 16'

Hi MyPenname and everyone!

I love that story! You're starting to give depth to your characters, and the plot is moving forward!

I still expect some sort of invocation orgy with the new monster girls, but I have a feeling you're close to the point where plot wins over smut, and that full-sex chapters will soon be far and few between plot-driven ones.

That's a good thing for me, not that I don't enjoy the occasional orgy or love scene, I do like them, and you write them well, but in this story, they could move to the background and the plot at large would still be great.

You do you, but I like where you're headed right now if it makes sense!

Best regards,

Cortavar

Fuck ya! *fist bump* Great work.