All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Less sex scenes, more plot please.

Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettabout 1 year ago

Oh look at that! Was about 1/3rd plot then back to worthless sex scenes! Damn I'm good at predicting this.

Next one will be maybe half before devolving back to pointless sex. Feb, 27, '23 Dated for posterity.

Seriously, I've seen pure stroke stories with more plot than this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More sex scenes with more plot; both are terrific!

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