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All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 31'

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GnomeBillyGnomeBillyabout 1 year ago

I love this story, and thank you for having so much great content the last 3 "chapters", but this entire battle should be 1 long chapter. Chapters don't end DURING a battle...3 times so far...

MachariusMachariusabout 1 year ago

As others already said: your story is great! But the dividing of this battle into several chapters isn't good!

It robbed the flaw of reading and makes the battle boring

IMHO you should avoid it in the future.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I agree that splitting a scene into multiple chapters hurts the flow.

Side note, why has no one thought to shove that bastard of rock and metal into the water? He'd sink right to the bottom and drown

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