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Click hereHis strong hand crushed about her slender neck. He stared down at her, his stony face twisting with lust. His eyes raked her naked form. She thrashed and kicked beneath him as he choked the life out of her.
"I hope you'll serve me," he said, staring down at her body. "You are sexy."
Never! Never! Never! screamed through Garnet's thoughts as he squeezed the life from her.
She clawed at his face, but she scratched at granite, not flesh. He was armored against her. Protected. Her knees slammed up into his armor, striking his breastplate. She could do nothing against him. He was too defended.
The world grew black along the edges.
* * / *
The basilisks were dead. I looked around and groaned as Lana was struck by an ice ax. My movie starlet crashed dead to the ground. Fury beat in me. Mom strangled the fairy and...
Ziamili choked my little sister. Fury slammed through me.
There was the bastard I had to kill. The monster whose minions had petrified Halia. Robbed her light and beauty from the world. My left hand balled into a fist, my right gripping my spear. I glared at him choking my little sister to death.
"Water's crushing weight surround, feel the grasp of Lord Enki squeeze!" spat from my lips.
I agree that splitting a scene into multiple chapters hurts the flow.
Side note, why has no one thought to shove that bastard of rock and metal into the water? He'd sink right to the bottom and drown
As others already said: your story is great! But the dividing of this battle into several chapters isn't good!
It robbed the flaw of reading and makes the battle boring
IMHO you should avoid it in the future.
I love this story, and thank you for having so much great content the last 3 "chapters", but this entire battle should be 1 long chapter. Chapters don't end DURING a battle...3 times so far...