All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 45'

Ugh. Bringing back the dead father is a low blow... I hope his daughter can persuade him and he's not just plain mind-controlled or something.

Here's hoping it goes well with the elf. Knowledge is power, as they say. I'm sure she's sexy too... *wink*

Btw, I wouldn't mind a review of all Leo's spells and abilities and everything, their levels, whether they're internal or external, etc. That's usually a good idea every so often with any story that borders on the litrpg genre, which this clearly does with the systemized progression of dungeon builder abilities. Of course, there's a bunch of new spells that come with the 4 new glyphs, but even with the 4 glyphs he already had from book 1, not all the spells' names have actually been stated, just some description of what they do. For example, we've been told there's a dark internal spell at level 2 that hides Leo's magic so he seems like a normal person, but its name has never been mentioned afaik. It also feels a little odd that there's no level 2 internal lightning spell as far as I can tell. That's fine if that's how it is, but it makes me feel like I'm missing something, so it'd be nice to have a canonical data sheet to refer to.

I agree with tejing. All of it. I hope Halia's father will be convinced of Leo's good intentions, his voice as a legendary hero could mean a lot to the inhabitants of this world.

I also wish for a detailed explanation of the spells, with names and function. If there's an internal lightning spell, speed or passive shock could be pretty cool.

Speed is generally a very important characteristic in RPGs, in combat it adds to attack, defense, movement and support ability, it's often what makes the difference at high levels.

Passive shock is cool as well, especially combined with the armor spells he's got. Get hit? First it bounces, then your enemy gets shocked, 2 for 1!

I hope the next girl he summons is his other sister.

I'm not sure who the real villain is Fuegin or Shorvin?

Shorvin may be just misguided by his hatred for Dungeon Builders because of people like the twins that Leo defeated.

That leaves Fuegin and his motives.

Great job, looking forward to book 3.

I especially liked the metal-morphic orc dildos, that was original.

I love these story's. I hope the next one will be soon.

I'm loving this series. I really hope the next chapter come soon.

I enjoyed these last two installments.

Please attempt to give a bit more depths to your world, the intrigues in it and its main characters.

Agreement with both cortavar and Tejing would like a detailed explanation for all the spells with name and function along with all the current monster girls maybe like at the start of each book. Would also like to see the level one monster girls for the new four that he got including the extra level ones he got from stone and metal.

I'm betting that shorvin is just a dungeon builder hiding in plain sight.

希望多写一些和妈妈的故事，千万不要出现第二个男人

No doubt about it, loving the story so far, and look forward to book 3! :D I almost feel like these books need a wiki to break down spells, companions, etc.

People the only reason he kept the lvl 1's he has was so that they didn't die. He kept them even though he could have replaced them with stronger montsters. There's absolutely no reason to make more lvl 1's when he can now make lvl 3's instead.

Excellent ending! I'm excited for the continuing saga of Leo!