All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 03 Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Look, it’s great that you’re finally getting Book 3 going. However, these short chapters are killing us and the flow of the story. The sex is ok, but you’ve had so much of it with so little time passing between each orgy, it just gets old. Keep building out the story, make the sex have meaning and move the story forward.

WolfenherzWolfenherz10 months ago

Love it, thanks.

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