All Comments on 'Dungeons and Drunk Girls Ch. 04'

All in all this was a great series, however the ending seemed quite rushed. My other issue is that Ashley, Victor and Jayne was a huge dynamic in this story so to leave the conversation that was shared between Vic and Jayne untold was a bit of a let down. Still 5 stars though. Looking forward to what happens when the parents get home.

Loved the series. Really enjoyable. Hope you will write about the next sage the three will have.

For all of you who read this far, thanks! There will be more chapters, this is just the first arc.

This story was great, despite me never playing D&D

Fantastic series. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Loved the premise, very few errors, hope to see arcs from all of the characters. Thank you. Excellent job.

Love this series. As an avid RPG player, I appreciated the attention to detail you put into that aspect of the story, including the trick d20. Also, Ashely and Vic's "reveal" was nicely done. Looking forward to more from you.

Wow. Never played d&d. But I loved this. I hope to find out the OTHER story. Sorry about not commenting till now. But it was a very good, well told tale. And very sexy as well. Looking forward to more from you. Great job

Sad that it's the end, and I am glad that the sluttiness of all concerned is said not to have ruined things for the couple concerned.

Five for you

I read further down in the comments, and this may not be the end. Good luck!

Memorable. Re read it.

I really enjoyed this series. It’s absurd in roughly every way, but also absurdly hot, so that’s all right, then.

I thought it was a pretty good story overall. The lowering of barriers through D&D roleplay worked nicely for both the incest and group sex dynamic.

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I will say that I was hoping for more of a resolution in which Theo and Kaitlyn, Ben and Violet, Vic and Marla, Jayne and Ashley got together, the latter four in a long-term happy foursome type deal. But hey, that’s my head canon.

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I think with the eight characters we have, it could be wrapped up without involving the parents; however, it’s your story and we readers were just lucky enough to stumble upon it!

Love the story over all, only criticism I have is fairly minor and that's regarding names, there were several times over all 4 chapters where Jaynes name swapped between Jayne and Jane and then the same for Kaitlyn/Kirsten/Kristen. While easily distinguished between the various 8 it still did pull me out of the story a few times 5 stars over all