All Comments on 'Eat Your Cake and Have It Too Pt. 02'

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Peanut717Peanut717over 2 years agoAuthor

Below is the actual article searched in this story by James; of course, never researching a subject like that never realized it could remotely be true. To my surprise, it's at least possible.

https://metro.co.uk/2016/04/18/this-sex-technique-will-prove-whether-you-are-in-love-as-a-couple-5825808

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I looked at the article there is some validity to it. good job Peanut717

ValleyVixinValleyVixinover 2 years ago

I am loving this story as it develops. The more I feel the people, the more it can move me; make me loose myself in it.

Keep doing what you are doing!! ♡

Peanut717Peanut717over 2 years agoAuthor

ValleyV: I would like to thank you for your comments; writing is hard work having to make sure to dot the i's and cross the t's and have a compelling story. I always try to answer everyone who attempts to ask a question. I am currently working on part 3; it has a plot twist I think you might like.

plusepluseover 2 years ago

Compliments!

Excellent written and sensuous.

Next part please...

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Most stories I have read are ordinary following the tends nothing original. There is no love I guess I am reading in the wrong genre. This stuff degrades the norm but for what purpose? forget marriage unless it's broken. I get no comments no matter if I've written a horrible ...