All Comments on 'Edging'

Nice premise.

But coud have used some teasing with other than her hand (and then her mouth).

Fout stars.

Great, loved it. Maybe next time not let him come and put him in a cock cage for a day.

great images!

Great story! I could almost feel the frustration of him as he longed to cum. Just think if she would not have allowed him to cum and he had to go to bed unable to! It would have been worse than when Mount St. Helen erupted when he finally was able to shoot!

This is very similar to what I have written in the past but it is definitely it's own story and original. Bravo, I loved it.

Good premise.

But over too soon.

Not enough teasing via dialog.

Was he blindfolded?

Could he see her fingering her pussy?

She didn't wipe her wet fingers on his upper lip so he could smell her excitement.

Four stars.