by destodes777
An interesting story but the hero should not change. He was weak. I'm interested in reading about a weak hero. Alpha males are just boring.
In this chapter, new unnatural types of sex have appeared. That's good, it's getting more interesting. We need evolution. A city turning into an alien hive. Conquest of humanity. Something like that.
I really hope there will be another chapter, several in fact. It's good he has gotten confidence but for the most part keep him humble, since Aurora seems to be his future 'mate'.
Wholeheartedly disagree that the main character should be kept weak. Vulnerable sure. But he should grow strong to fill a new role at least to serve as an equal to his future mate.
Great story so far, hard to find such a great balanced read like this. Hope to see more from
He is still the same useless doormat. The only thing that's changed is that he is not fatty.