All Comments on 'Elias and Peter Ch. 01'

by strawberrymoon

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lanalovelacelanalovelace6 months ago

Great start. I’m digging’ it. Can’t wait for part 2!

GybbsGybbs6 months ago

what a charming - nay, enthralling - tale. i am totally into these two. more, please!

MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer6 months ago

I'm with the other two commenters, I'm intrigued and want to know where this story goes as well. Nice job so far.

BeefyhungtopguyBeefyhungtopguy6 months ago

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

strawberrymoonstrawberrymoon5 months agoAuthor

THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR YOUR KIND WORDS!!! I was nervous to post as ive never submitted a story like this but i’m very encouraged and grateful that it seems to be hitting off so well! Chapter two has been submitted for publication and should be approved within the next 12 hours or so. I hope you enjoy! lots of love for you all <3

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

this seems very sweet, not at all what I expected in literotica

Singlegayboy666Singlegayboy6664 months ago

Absolutely love this first chapter! Wonderful writing and a wonderful story - excited to read the next chapter and hopefully more from you in the future!

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I like to write, and I like to write a lot. I'm a hopeless romantic, and most of the stories I write are stories I particularly wish I could find and read more of.

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