by Crystal_L_Veey
O. M. G.
That was a thrilling read (and, you know, accompanying activities...)
I am looking forward to follow on stories.
S. M.
Can't wait to read the second part again, so much detail and put together with such passion rather than lust
I read, and commented on, the second chapter before I found the first. Maybe chapter 2 should start with a recommendation that the reader read chapter 1 first. I usually check but - this time I din't - and made a foolish comment. Sorry. Good story - I enjoyed both chapters.